Re: Second Jounrey into the Mines of Kazak Zaroth

Posted by Madame M on Aug 10, 2011; 10:46am
URL: http://the-lost-and-the-damned.71.s1.nabble.com/Second-Jounrey-into-the-Mines-of-Kazak-Zaroth-tp6671317p6671857.html

Yup - you make some fair points about the writing there. I admit I had forgotten to write in my notes that the trap was disabled, which is why it wasn't included, and I could try and cover up the over odd little mistakes by saying that I'm suffering a  bit with a cold at the moment so my full attention was not on the write-up when I did it, but I think I'm going to have to be more careful in future to make sure that gaming terms don't creep into the fiction.

And I took the spellings from the last Anja write-up I did, so assumed they were correct in that one as they hadn't been picked up!